CMV Critique - Sakizou's Pearl

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#1 ichigo_m. on 5 years ago

Hey guys! I've recently started working on more videos trying to expand my skill set and make some art!
Recently I finished my first CMV and I was hoping to get some feedback on it.
Watching it again there are for sure some things I don't like (too much dancing, not enough costume shots, was I trying to be sexy? lolwut?, to bright of exposure, etc) but I wanted to hear what you guys thought.

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So I would love to know what I could improve for next time! (:

Thanks guys! <3

#2 StarsOfCassiopeia on 5 years ago

Aww, super cute, Eli! <3

You're definitely challenging yourself here by being both the cosplayer and videographer, and that certainly limits your shot options. Love the interspersion of detail shots and full body shots-- that helps keep interest despite your limitations on range.

One thing I did notice is that your pans are a little unsteady-- almost jerk-y? You'll move quickly and then slow down suddenly, like you realized you were going too fast, and then pick up speed again. I think that's an easy fix with practice on the smoother motions!